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Comparing My First Phone to the One I Use Now

by AHN Too 2025. 4. 1.
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My first phone and the one I use now are completely different—not just in design, but in how they affect my daily life.
It’s amazing to think about how far technology has come in such a short time.

 


๐Ÿ“˜ ํ•ด์„
์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ฒ˜์Œ ์ผ๋˜ ์ „ํ™”๊ธฐ์™€ ์ง€๊ธˆ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์€ ๋””์ž์ธ๋ฟ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ, ์ œ ์ผ์ƒ์— ๋ฏธ์น˜๋Š” ์˜ํ–ฅ ๋ฉด์—์„œ๋„ ์™„์ „ํžˆ ๋‹ฌ๋ผ์š”.
์งง์€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ์•ˆ์— ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ฐœ์ „ํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์ •๋ง ๋†€๋ผ์›Œ์š”.

๐Ÿง  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•/ํ‘œํ˜„ ์„ค๋ช…

  • not just A, but B: A๋ฟ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ B๊นŒ์ง€ (๊ฐ•์กฐ ๊ตฌ์กฐ)
  • how far ~ has come: ~๊ฐ€ ์–ผ๋งˆ๋‚˜ ๋ฐœ์ „ํ•ด์™”๋Š”์ง€

 

 

 

Back then, phones were mainly for calling and texting.
But now, my phone is like a pocket-sized computer that I use for almost everything—communication, entertainment, work, even learning.


๐Ÿ“˜ ํ•ด์„
์˜ˆ์ „์—๋Š” ์ „ํ™”๊ธฐ๋Š” ์ฃผ๋กœ ์ „ํ™”์™€ ๋ฌธ์ž๋งŒ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ๊ธฐ๊ธฐ์˜€์–ด์š”.
ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฑธ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ‘์ฃผ๋จธ๋‹ˆ ์† ์ปดํ“จํ„ฐ’๊ฐ€ ๋˜์—ˆ์ฃ —์†Œํ†ต, ์˜ค๋ฝ, ์—…๋ฌด, ์‹ฌ์ง€์–ด ํ•™์Šต๊นŒ์ง€์š”.

๐Ÿง  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•/ํ‘œํ˜„ ์„ค๋ช…

  • back then: ๊ทธ ๋‹น์‹œ์—๋Š”
  • mainly for ~: ์ฃผ๋กœ ~๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ
  • almost everything: ๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ

 

 

 

 

I still remember my first phone—it was a small flip phone with a tiny screen and physical buttons.
I could only send a limited number of texts, and the internet was slow and expensive.
These days, I use my phone to stream music, join video calls, take high-quality photos, and even edit documents on the go.


๐Ÿ“˜ ํ•ด์„
์ €๋Š” ์•„์ง๋„ ์ฒซ ํœด๋Œ€ํฐ์ด ๊ธฐ์–ต๋‚˜์š”—์ž‘์€ ํ™”๋ฉด๊ณผ ๋ฌผ๋ฆฌ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ํด๋”ํฐ์ด์—ˆ์ฃ .
๋ฌธ์ž๋„ ์ œํ•œ์ ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋ณด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ณ , ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์€ ๋А๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋น„์ŒŒ์–ด์š”.
์š”์ฆ˜์—” ์Œ์•… ์ŠคํŠธ๋ฆฌ๋ฐ, ํ™”์ƒํ†ตํ™”, ๊ณ ํ™”์งˆ ์‚ฌ์ง„ ์ดฌ์˜, ์‹ฌ์ง€์–ด ์ด๋™ ์ค‘ ๋ฌธ์„œ ํŽธ์ง‘๊นŒ์ง€ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜์ฃ .

๐Ÿง  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•/ํ‘œํ˜„ ์„ค๋ช…

  • I still remember ~: ์•„์ง๋„ ~์ด ๊ธฐ์–ต๋‚œ๋‹ค
  • on the go: ์ด๋™ ์ค‘์—
  • stream / edit / join: ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์œผ๋กœ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ํ™œ๋™์— ์“ฐ์ด๋Š” ๋™์‚ฌ๋“ค

 

 

 

 

 

So when I compare my first phone with the one I use today, it’s clear that phones have become much more than just communication tools.
They’ve become an essential part of our lives—helping us stay informed, productive, and connected every single day.


๐Ÿ“˜ ํ•ด์„
๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ฒ˜์Œ ์ „ํ™”๊ธฐ์™€ ์ง€๊ธˆ์˜ ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์„ ๋น„๊ตํ•ด ๋ณด๋ฉด, ์ „ํ™”๊ธฐ๋Š” ๋‹จ์ˆœํ•œ ‘์†Œํ†ต ๋„๊ตฌ’๋ฅผ ํ›จ์”ฌ ๋„˜์–ด์„  ์กด์žฌ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์—ˆ์–ด์š”.
์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์‚ถ์˜ ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ ์ธ ์ผ๋ถ€๋กœ, ๋งค์ผ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์–ป๊ณ , ์ƒ์‚ฐ์„ฑ์„ ๋†’์ด๊ณ , ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค๊ณผ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ๋˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๊ผญ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์กด์žฌ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์—ˆ์ฃ .

๐Ÿง  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•/ํ‘œํ˜„ ์„ค๋ช…

  • it’s clear that ~: ~๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ถ„๋ช…ํ•˜๋‹ค
  • essential part of our lives: ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์‚ถ์—์„œ ํ•„์ˆ˜์ ์ธ ๋ถ€๋ถ„

 

 

 

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